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Gub's avatar
Jan 23Edited

Oh! How lovely. You really have a way of describing an experience

“As if consciousness itself

leaned close enough

to say: See.”

I did a tour in Waitomo Caves many years ago when I lived on the North Island :) absolutely magnificent and your poem brought back that memory which was filled with total awe.

Phoeby's avatar

What a stunning piece. I love how you move from geology to spirituality without forcing it—just letting awe arrive on its own. The imagery is so tactile (“limestone that still listened”), and that ending—“Only glowing, waiting to be noticed”—hit me right in the chest.

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